Tuesday, September 7, 2010

it's that young-girl, wide-eyed, first-love, one-time innocence;; four

After Jonny and I had our lunch, we headed back onto the road and took the right exit this time. Suddenly the lake was in our sights. The sun was beating down rapidly on everyone. We got out of the car and saw all of our friends sitting on the hoods of cars and drinking beers. Jon wrapped his arm around my waist as we found Steph.

"Oh my god, are you two together now?" She gasped.

"We're still talking about things." I replied.

"But not for long. I like her. A lot." Jon smiles as he kisses my cheek, causing Steph to squeal.

"Well Come on, Gabby and Christina are here."

"Where's Gina?"

"She couldn't make it. She's having a party at her house tonight though."

I nodded as Jon and I decided to go swimming instead. I took off my shorts and shirt and tip toed into the lake. It was freezing. I screamed as Jon scooped me up into his arms and headed out deeper into the lake. I kicked and screamed, but he didn't care.

"Jon, if you throw me into the lake, I'll kill you."

"What? You want to be thrown into the lake?"


"So am I."

It was like an arctic rush when my skin was soaked in the water. I came up for air and tackled Jon. We were both laughing so much to the point that I couldn't breathe. I wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him roughly. He returned the kiss as he grabbed a lock of my hair.

"Ally, will you be my girlfriend?"

"I don't know, Jon."


"Cause, you're leaving in September, and you'll be gone for 10 months again."

"But, I really like you. I think we could make it work."

"I don't want you to think. I want you to know." I sighed as he gently touched my cheek.

"Fine, Ally, I know we'll make it." There was an uncertainty to his voice, I could feel it.

"I still don't know."

"Why are you being so stubborn?"

"Why are you being so impatient? Give a girl a chance would you."

"Are we ever going to able to talk without a fight?" He snapped.

"I don't know, are we?"

He cursed to the sky before he sternly looked over at me, "I swear, after Gina's party, I will make you my girlfriend."

"We'll see about that."


  1. Oh well, hai dere Jonny can you make out with me in Lake Toews? Great update, I loved it.

  2. Haha, I see Jon and Ally took the right exit this time around. Maybe he will listen to her more often.

    Hmm, he swears he will make her his girlfriend? Sounds like a pretty bold statement to me. I am curious to see how their relationship progresses from here.

    Great update. Can't wait for the next chapter.

  3. Ah, this is such a good story. I can't wait to see what happens and the next chapter.

  4. So I just found this story and I LOVE IT!!! :D :D

    can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hopefully Jonny makes Ally his girlfriend they seem so cute together!